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Desolation of my heart

04.01.2013 02:09 EST
I try my best to write a love-sad poem...
I want to know that am i a good poet or not so i am posting it here,so please write true about it...

Alone i am,
nobody is with me;
feeling the pain,
i am on my knee;

in the darkness of loneliness,
you left me in pain;
my love and my emotions,
all got in vain;

No one can understand,
the desolation of my heart;
emptiness came in my life,
the day you depart;

Walking alone around the street,
i search for you;
without you my
dearest love,
my life is undue;


yours sincerely
rehan khan

eagerly waiting for your comments...
4 Comments:
Itz really superb poem.... Which obviously shows the feelings related to anyone who is emotionally attached.... Awesome bhai.... http://a-2k-asip.peperonity.net/
12.01.2013 12:29 EST,
superb lines bro..nice poem.well done..u can be a good poet if u want to . .keep on creatin bro!
10.01.2013 04:18 EST,
soo nice, which describes the wound feelings of solitude http://a.heartness.peperonity.net/
04.01.2013 08:25 EST,


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